I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hey Turanga!, My name Is Taison and I am from Otaki college. I really like how intuitive the circles are and the idea of this is great. This is a really cool post and deserves more attention. I learnt more about kiwis in a super fun way using this. I think that you could rearrange the circles to fit where the facts would relate to the kiwi. Like how when you said that kiwis fur can be brown, black and white, you could put the circle on the fur.
Hi Turanga it’s Daisy.
ReplyDeleteI like kiwi’s
I like your kiwi blog post
Maybe you could put more information in your kiwi post.
Hey Turanga!, My name Is Taison and I am from Otaki college.
ReplyDeleteI really like how intuitive the circles are and the idea of this is great.
This is a really cool post and deserves more attention. I learnt more about kiwis in a super fun way using this.
I think that you could rearrange the circles to fit where the facts would relate to the kiwi. Like how when you said that kiwis fur can be brown, black and white, you could put the circle on the fur.