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Thursday, September 29, 2022

Night Essay

 


Describe at least one important technique used in the text. Explain how the technique created an emotional response in you.

The Holocaust was a terrible and tragic time in the world, when many people died for senseless reasons. Elie Wiesel's memoir 'Night' is his recollection of his days in Auschwitz from the ghetto days to the liberation of Poland. In his writing, Elle Wiesel used a variety of language techniques such as first person narration and single word sentences. His memoir had an emotional impact on me, making me realize that Europe is green fields now but was a vast and tragic battlefield that affected the world for years to come.

As they were escorted to the train platform Elie Wiesel said, "We walked towards the station where a convoy of cattle cars was waiting. The Hungarian police made us climb into the cars, eighty persons in each one." Elie Wiesel uses first-person narration with the pronouns 'We/us' to show events from his point of view so we can picture what really happened to him. This impacted me emotionally because I'd be scared walking into a train that could be the death of me.

As they proceeded off the train onto the platform they were sorted into groups, "I didn't know that this was the moment in time and the place where I was leaving my mother and Tzipora forever." Elie again uses first-person narration to help us see this moment through his eyes. This had an emotional impact on me because I'd be broken from seeing my family member taken in any case. It feels like he was very sad to see his sister and mother were leaving, not knowing he would never see them again.

As they walked into the terror camp Elie and his father spotted a horrific sight. A pit shrouded in smoke and ash soon revealed something which could not be forgotten, it was filled with the corpses of adults and children. Elie said, "Babies! Yes, I did see this, with my own eyes . . . children thrown into the flames." Elie uses a single word sentence with an exclamation mark to show his shock and focus us on the word 'babies'. The impact this had on me emotionally was that I was in shock because babies going into the flame, that's not something talked about with ease.

Through the use of first-person narration and single-word sentences, Elie Wiesel's memoir had an emotional impact on me with such events as the train to Auschwitz, babies getting tossed into the flames, the hanging of people, and babies getting tossed into the fire. Nowadays we have peace, except for Ukraine, but then it was much darker days.


Thursday, August 20, 2020

Be Like Mike



My Learning Intentions:
1.begining/middle/end journey
2.past/present tense



                  Be Like Mike
On the date of 17 of November, a baby named mikal jardin. Mikal’s Childhood was a very sporty one having reached a pretty high vertical for a man baby. His dad played college basketball at duke university 
As for his mum she left him at birth going to all his dads games his family was’int a rich family with struggling dad to pay rent. So he took the job at working at the supermarket for money to help his dad with rent. One day he forgot lunch so instead he went for a run to the basketball courts when he got there the local basketball team was praticing for playoffs when one of the players asked mikal to join in so he did first quarter started with the tip off to the alley mikal stilll had yet to show his skill and then he got subbed in soon later there ankle ankle crossover after crossover 3 after 3. Coaches mind all over the place so much potential  skill and victory. After the scrimmage they offered the young mikal a contract and scholarship full with excitement he rushed home to tell. When he got home told his dad about the scoly soon later ya boi was in university of Duke. Mikal’s First game was really legendary geting a triple double with 50 points for rest of the season he got 42 point per game having one of the best seasons in NCAA history until he was guaranteed to get first pick until he got an ACL injury and got down graded to the G league. Struggling to get his game back he tried & tried and then a miracle  happened he got drafted had and one of the most legendary career in history. Later in his career he got inducted into the basketball hall of fame and got himself into the goat conversation and became a legend.           






Friday, June 26, 2020

Buckets

all started with a scream then off were the racers then scoop after scoop. The contenders clashed at the rim of the bucket and the echo of screams all around the quad As the sun was its peak. Then My name got called soon after. the clash happened again as competitiveness fumes off Nikora and the saltiness from the water. I wondered who was gonna win? Sadly no one won and we went back inside causing me to get bored again. But the water bucket games fun. Apart from the cup bit in my mouth and cheating. And lack of knowledge of this unknown game

Wednesday, April 15, 2020